Contemporary New Adult
Title: The Burning of Isobel Key
Author - Jen McConnel
Date Published: October 1, 2012
Synopsis:
When Lou travels to Scotland, she’s a mess. She’s twenty-six, unemployed, and unsure of herself. It doesn’t help that she’s traveling with Tammy, her best friend, who is everything Lou is not.
At first, the trip pushes Lou towards the brink of depression, but then she meets Brian, a handsome local tour guide. When Brian tells the tourists about the countless witches burned in Scotland, Lou starts to listen. And when she discovers information about Isobel Key, one of the victims of the seventeenth century, Lou finds renewed purpose.
Lou has begun exploring the Neo Pagan faith, a dramatic shift from her wealthy Catholic upbringing. Despite her fears of being too “hocus pocusy”, Lou turns to her new faith as she struggles to unravel the mystery surrounding the death of Isobel Key. But faith or not, Lou must face her demons if she has any hope of righting the wrongs of the past.
Author Bio:
Jen McConnel first began writing poetry as a child. Since then, her words have appeared in a variety of magazines and journals, including Sagewoman, PanGaia, and The Storyteller (where she won the people’s choice 3rd place award for her poem, “Luna”).
She is also an active reviewer for Voices of Youth Advocates (VOYA), and proud member of SCBWI, NCWN, and SCWW.
A Michigander by birth, she now lives and writes in the beautiful state of North Carolina. When she isn't crafting worlds of fiction, she teaches writing composition at a community college. Once upon a time, she was a middle school teacher, a librarian, and a bookseller, but those are stories for another time.
When Lou travels to Scotland, she’s a mess. She’s twenty-six, unemployed, and unsure of herself. It doesn’t help that she’s traveling with Tammy, her best friend, who is everything Lou is not.
At first, the trip pushes Lou towards the brink of depression, but then she meets Brian, a handsome local tour guide. When Brian tells the tourists about the countless witches burned in Scotland, Lou starts to listen. And when she discovers information about Isobel Key, one of the victims of the seventeenth century, Lou finds renewed purpose.
Lou has begun exploring the Neo Pagan faith, a dramatic shift from her wealthy Catholic upbringing. Despite her fears of being too “hocus pocusy”, Lou turns to her new faith as she struggles to unravel the mystery surrounding the death of Isobel Key. But faith or not, Lou must face her demons if she has any hope of righting the wrongs of the past.
Author Bio:
Jen McConnel first began writing poetry as a child. Since then, her words have appeared in a variety of magazines and journals, including Sagewoman, PanGaia, and The Storyteller (where she won the people’s choice 3rd place award for her poem, “Luna”).
She is also an active reviewer for Voices of Youth Advocates (VOYA), and proud member of SCBWI, NCWN, and SCWW.
A Michigander by birth, she now lives and writes in the beautiful state of North Carolina. When she isn't crafting worlds of fiction, she teaches writing composition at a community college. Once upon a time, she was a middle school teacher, a librarian, and a bookseller, but those are stories for another time.
EXCERPT:
CHAPTER ONE
“I quit!” Lou’s words echoed around the checkout line, and customers craned their necks to see what was happening. Red in the face, Lou looked down at her register in embarrassment. Her manager patted her shoulder.
“Let’s go back in the office to talk about this.” He turned, expecting her to follow.
“No!” Louder than she’d intended, Lou stood her ground. “You heard me. I’ve had enough of this store.” As she spoke,
she tossed her nametag on the counter. An
errant brown curl flipped over her eye, and she pushed it away. Under the shocked gaze of her manager and the
curious stares of a snake-like line of holiday shoppers, Lou fled.
Once she was outside in the bitter December wind, she headed for the nearest
T stop, acting out of habit more than conscious thought. She’d walked this easy route between the bookstore
and the T for the past four years, and her body took over while her mind churned.
She had a college degree, for Pete’s sake! Cum laude from Duke University had landed
her a job selling books and stationary to the snobby suburbanites outside of Boston. Sighing, she paid her fare and took her seat on
the train bound for the city center.
Suddenly, the weight of what she had done hit her, and she buried her face
in her hands. What was she thinking, quitting
her job like that? Lou replayed the afternoon
in her mind. Nothing had happened today that
hadn’t happened a thousand other times. Maybe
it was the proverbial straw that broke the camel’s back: four years of answering
bizarre questions and customers who were always right had finally taken its toll
on her psyche.
But now what would she do? Lou wasn’t
a person who acted on impulse: she was cautious and considered her options. And now she was unemployed the week before Christmas. Lou slumped in her seat. Unless she figured something out, and fast, she
might have to move back in with her family.
It wasn’t that Lou had anything against her family, not really: her parents
had adopted her shortly after her birth, and they’d never made her feel like anything
but their cherished only child. But Lou was
almost 27, and it had never been part of her plan to live at home after college. Part of her plan: that was funny, she thought.
It sounded like she’d ever had a plan.
Sure, she always knew that she’d attend college after high school. With parents who had both made careers in the
medical field, Lou had never doubted that she’d follow their lead and soak up as
much education as she could. Money wasn’t
an issue, so when she turned 18 and Duke University accepted her, she thought it
would be ideal. She moved to North Carolina
and spent four years studying the liberal arts, unable to decide on a tangible career
path. Nothing seemed to fit, and even though
she earned her degree, she didn’t really know what she was going to do after college. It was lucky that her best friend needed a roommate
in Boston, Lou mused, or she might have ended up back with her parents four years
ago.
Shaking her head, Lou glanced up as the train rolled to a stop. Standing unsteadily, she tried to ignore the raging
pity party in her mind. As the doors whooshed open, the cold winter air assaulted
her again. For the first time she realized
that she’d left her coat behind in the employee lounge. Hesitating for a moment, Lou considered taking
the train back and getting her things.
“There’s no going back,” she whispered.
Even the excuse of her coat might be enough to put her back in her manager’s
office, begging for her job back. Shivering,
Lou hurried up the stairs and out of the tunnel. The old black light posts were swathed in candy
cane stripes, and every window she passed displayed some holiday decorations. What a time to be unemployed, Lou thought sourly
as she buzzed the doorman at her apartment.
Unlocking the door on the seventeenth floor, Lou called out nervously, “Hello? Tammy?”
Her roommate didn’t answer, and Lou felt relieved. She wasn’t ready to face anyone yet, not until
she’d figured out her next step. Checking
the kitschy clock on the wall of the hallway, Lou realized it was only a quarter
after four. Tammy wouldn’t be home ‘til seven
or later. Relaxing, Lou stacked her boots
neatly in the hall closet and headed to the kitchen.
The sleek, modern kitchen was a mess: remnants from Tammy’s last party were
still strewn across the stainless countertops.
Sighing, Lou plugged in the electric kettle and searched for a mug. While she waited for the kettle to whistle, she
started to tidy up. She loaded the dishwasher
carelessly and overfilled the soap container, but when she was done the room looked
much more presentable. Satisfied, Lou added
a packet of hot chocolate to the mug. After
a moment’s hesitation, she stirred a hearty dollop of vanilla vodka into the chipped
Disney World souvenir.
Leaning against the counter, Lou studied the apartment. The kitchen was open to the rest of the space,
and from her vantage point, Lou could see the living room and the stairs that led
to her lofted bedroom. She sighed, wondering
how much longer she’d get to enjoy this apartment with her best friend. Her parents had helped her out with bills from
time to time, but Lou felt certain that all assistance of this kind would stop if
they found out she was no longer employed.
“What’s the matter with me?” She wondered out loud, tears in her eyes. Taking her mug, she crossed to the living room
and flopped down on the fluffy red sofa.
She began flipping aimlessly through the stack of magazines on the coffee
table.
Suddenly, her cell phone buzzed in her pocket. Glancing at the cracked screen, Lou saw that it
was Tammy calling. Sighing, she flipped the
phone open.
“Hello?”
Tammy’s voice was crackly but excited.
“Lou? Guess what? You’ll never guess
what happened!”
Lou sighed, annoyed. “What?”
“They gave me an account!” Tammy squealed
in delight. “Did you hear?”
“Tammy, that’s amazing!”
“And the best part is, guess where the account is based? Guess!”
Not wanting to play games, Lou asked, “Would you just tell me?”
“Scotland! Isn’t that awesome?”
Stunned speechless, Lou just stared at the phone.
“Lou! Louisa! Are you still there?”
She shook herself. “Yes, I’m here. Tammy, that’s great!”
“I know! They want me to go over there next week to check things out and
meet everybody.”
“But isn’t next week Christmas? What
about your family?”
Tammy laughed. “They won’t care. But Lou, wouldn’t it be perfect to spend Christmas
in Scotland?”
Lou agreed that it would be. She ignored
the small bubble of jealousy starting to form in her heart.
“Tammy, I’m really excited for you.”
“For us, you mean.”
“What are you talking about?”
Tammy’s voice broke into a garbled stream of words.
“Tammy!” Lou shouted. “I can’t hear you.”
“In the T…we’ll talk… home…”
The cell phone made a crunching sound and the call dropped. Lou looked at her phone and leaned back into the
couch cushions. Wasn’t it just like fate
to give Tammy something so wonderful, she mused, when she was so miserable? Sniffing, Lou drained her cup of spiked cocoa
and headed upstairs to lie down.
SHORT EXCERPT: 276 words
As the flames rose, Isobel stopped cursing
and instead started to make a shrill, screaming whine, much like the sound of the
sap boiling in the logs at her feet. It was
so eerie, so utterly un-human that even the executioner, a man long seasoned to
the sounds of death, wanted to cover his ears and sob into the skirt of the nearest
woman.
The sound carried from the village green, through the streets and wynds,
penetrating the windows and doors shut tight against the execution. It was as if not attending could erase the sin
of allowing it to happen in the first place.
No one who heard that sound could reconcile it with the once melodious voice
of the burning woman. The evil thing at the
stake was not a woman they remembered or recognized.
Their memories were as short as the day, from the morning after her terrible
deeds were revealed and the witch was brought into town bound in the back of a pony
cart. It was suddenly as if none of the villagers
knew the poor creature at all. None could
recall seeking her help, and none would avow that she had always been kind and ready
to bake breads for town feasts or to watch the little ones play while their parents
danced together. Kindness lingers less than
murder, for it was obvious to all that the woman had murdered at least three souls,
if not countless others. Justice was being
served, and her blood would not stain the god fearing hands in St. Andrews. She was not their responsibility, and they wanted
to take no claim for her evil.
My Thoughts:
The Burning of Isobel Key is a story about a young woman, Lou, who quits her job in a bookstore because she is dissatisfied with it. Her roommate and best friend, Tammy, gets a chance to go to Scotland for her own job, her first client in advertising. Chance of a lifetime for both girls. While on a tour,Lou becomes interested in some history from the mid 1600's. The side story is about a woman, Isobel Key who is burned as a witch. Lou decides with the help of Tammy and the tour bus driver Brian that she wants to exonerate Isobel Key somehow. With research she is able to piece the story together and find out something interesting about her own birth and exactly what happened to Isobel so long ago.
A story with the history of the witch trials, Scotland and Wicca and a bit of romance make for an interesting read. I enjoyed it immensely!
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I haven't read much about the witches in Scotland so this sounds really interesting. Thanks for the giveaway!
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