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21 January 2013

The Babi Makers by Christopher Geoffrey McPherson




About The Babi Makers 

Welcome to Nové, a planet much like your own. There is no war or hunger. No conflict of any kind. It's a "happy life ever" on this utopian world. Balance has finally been achieved after all life was nearly extinguished during The Fall. There is one major industry on Nové: the making of babies. Babies are the most important resource on the planet.
Hiperyan works in the babi industry. She loves assembling babies. Her life is perfect; her virile mate, Dion, is ideal. But she's been feeling a little sick, of late. It's a mysterious illness the likes of which has never been seen by the healers she visits. Concerned when the healers begin to die in a series of "accidents," Dion teams with his best friend, Conr, to take action. They eventually discover that Hiperyan's illness may jeopardize not only their lives, but all of Nové.
 "The Babi Makers" is a science-fiction novel that takes place on a planet where the
most important industry is the making of babies. In this excerpt, Hiperyan, who works in the babi industry, has been feeling ill. On her way to work, she stops at a healing center to see a practitioner.
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EXCERPT 
The healing center was just a little way from the building where she worked, so she decided to drop in and see what was wrong. She walked up to the clean white desk, behind which sat a young male who must have only just been promoted from his second scholastic rounds. She greeted him.
"Happy life ever," she said to the young male, smiling even though she did not feel like smiling.
"Happy life ever," the young male replied, as he turned his slim, muscular body toward her.
She watched the well-formed muscles of his chest as he twisted toward her. There was a small patch of hair in the center and that made her smile. She noticed the absence of a plastic band around his neck, which meant he was not currently in a cluster. She could easily see herself clustering with him, were she not already so involved.
"What do you wish to achieve on this beautiful centichronal?" the young male asked with a smile.
"I awoke ill this morning."
"I see. That was a sad way to start your centichronal," he said soothingly.
"Yes," the female agreed. "And it hasn't improved."
"I'm very sad to hear of your sadness. Perhaps we can comfort you," the young male said as he examined his communicator to see if a practitioner was available. "Ah," he said, smiling at the young female. "We have a practitioner available at the moment. Let's add you to our roster and you can go right in."
The female smiled slightly and nodded.
"What is your designation?" the young male asked.
"Hiperyan," the female said, beginning to feel a little faint.
"Oh, that's the name of the female who raised me," the young male said, smiling in return. "Would you place your thumb in the reader for me?"
Hiperyan complied, placing her thumb in a small plastic device. This action accessed all her personal information and shared it with the machines of the practitioner. In a brief moment, the registration was complete.
The young male rose, walked around the counter and made his way to Hiperyan. She admired the simple silk wrap around his waist and noticed how he must have taken two wraps and intertwined them to make his covering. She thought she would try something like that on the morrow.
"You don't look to be in the peak of health," he offered as he extended his muscular arm and gently grabbed her elbow. "Let's go into the room. The practitioner is on his way."
Inside the room, Hiperyan tried to find a comfortable sitting position and could not. It's not that the chair was not comfortable; rather, her entire body ached in a manner so unfamiliar to her. She had been ill before; that was nature's way. This time she felt different and it made her very unhappy.
The practitioner entered the room and looked at Hiperyan. He was an elder male whose full head of hair shone with a silvery glow. He had given up the silk wrap of the young and was instead wearing a silken robe. Hiperyan at once felt comfort in his presence and hoped she would soon be feeling better.
"Happy life ever," the practitioner said.
"Happy life ever," Hiperyan replied.
The practitioner viewed the notes on his communicator and adopted a frown on his lightly wrinkled face. "It says here you've been having a sad centichronal, and that you awoke with nausea. I'm very sad for you."
Hiperyan tried to smile, but just could not. "It's true. My centichronal started with sadness and has seen only more sadness."
"Did your sickness begin this morning?" the male asked.
"Yes, but I really haven't been feeling well for a few centichronals. Today is the worst."
"Well, the machine examined your body as you waited in this room and finds that you are a little out of balance. Have you been consuming regularly?"
"Yes," Hiperyan answered. "Our foodarama ceased to function one centichronal last decichronal, but we were able to consume with friends, and ours was replaced quickly. Otherwise, yes, I've been consuming properly."
"I see by your record you've completed nineteen chronals. Is that correct?"
"Yes, but my lifeaversary was a while back. I'm nearing twenty chronals now."
"Well, that's fine," the older male said. "When I leave this room, just sit back and relax. I'll have our machine provide you with a mist that it will spray in the air. You just breathe that for a few minutes and I am confident your comfort will return shortly."
"Thank you," Hiperyan said. "Should I avoid work today?"
"I don't think that will be necessary. Go to your place of work and if you continue to feel ill then come see me. I don't think that'll be necessary, however." He turned to leave the room. "Happy life ever," he said with a smile.
"Happy life ever," Hiperyan replied.
She leaned back into her chair and closed her eyes. Presently she heard the faint sound of a mist being sprayed into the air. She inhaled deeply and exhaled, inhaled and exhaled. She began to feel more comfortable and was happy her centichronal was finally improving.
Soon, a bell sounded and the room spoke. "Treatment complete. Happy life ever," and the door to the room opened.
Hiperyan walked out of the room and out the office with a special smile to the young male who had registered her.
She turned out of the door and resumed the walk to her work place.

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