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19 August 2015

Three-Four Kill Some More by John Achor Spotlight



Author John Achor’s amateur detective returns in the latest volume from Pro Se Productions ready to tackle crime once more in Three, Four-Kill Some More: A Casey Fremont Mystery.

The Book
Mystery and Danger follow Casey Fremont once again. This time, it might just get her killed…

Casey Fremont's ex-husband, Jarvis the Rat, is two months behind with alimony payments, so she asks TrueTemp Agency to find a temp job for her ― this time it is with a legal firm. As the new job begins and Casey’s life with her two roommates and detective boyfriend continues on, postcards begin arriving in Casey's mailbox. They contain images and cryptic messages. Messages that Casey believes relate to a series of murders occurring in the state capital, Little Rock.

Needing to decipher the messages to prevent further deaths, Casey has to both battle her stalker, the mysterious and deadly ‘Romeo,’ and convince the police that they are on the wrong trail. All before Casey or any of her friends end up dead.


The Author
John Achor's writing assignments have appeared in a variety of local, national and international magazines. He enjoys writing about, "The subjects I know best: the military, flying and people I've known." After that, John says he lets a vivid imagination take over.

The first of his careers spanned twenty years as a U.S. Air Force pilot. Following his military service, John was a teacher, trainer, management consultant and professor in a variety of industries: real estate, banking and education. In those fields he became a freelance computer instructor, user-developer, consultant, writer and Community College instructor

In May of 1999, John moved to Hot Springs Village, Arkansas where he resides in the piney woods with his wife Pat. John considers himself a professional writer since the 1990s.


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Chapter 1

Yesterday, Romeo followed Casey Fremont to the building where he knew the TrueTemp Agency was located. That bastard ex husband of hers must be late again with the alimony check. She needs to get a temporary job to tide her over until the end of the month.

Earlier today, he followed her to a building, a place he assumed she was interviewing for a job. Now he watched Casey as she strolled through the nearby mall. He wondered if she received his postcard yet... and tried to imagine her excitement at being faced with a new mystery. Was it too soon to take the next step? Romeo decided it was and melted into the crowd.
Chapter 2

The grip of the mild winter was over, temps were comfortable and allowed me to put the top down on the Mustang on occasion. My mood was rising as I approached my mailbox. It was empty.

I’m damn tired of waiting for the alimony check from my ex to arrive. Jarvis the Rat’s monthly tribute is arriving later every month.

Two days ago I visited the TrueTemp Employment Agency looking for another temp job. I can always rely on good ol’ Rutledge Trueblood to come through for me. He knows if he doesn’t, I’ll carry out my threat to tell his wife about the way he fondled me that first time at his agency.

It’s always fun to see Becca as well. Though she’s only the receptionist, she takes even less guff from Rutledge than I do. She and I have several things in common, among them a love of mystery novels. I turned Becca onto collecting signed first editions from some of the best authors in the field.

“Now Casey,” Becca said. “Ain’t you glad this meddling ol’ black gal put you on to Effie? I mean, seems like you and her have really hit it off.”

“You’re right,” I said. “And, I certainly don’t considering it meddling. It was a good move for both of us.”

Becca punched the intercom button and announced me. “Rutledge, Casey Fremont is here to see you and she has that look in her eye.” She waggled her head toward his office and smiled.

Rutledge pulled his typical strings and got me an interview for the following day and told me to report to a Mr. Thomasen. I don’t like Friday interviews – most bosses are looking forward to getting away for the weekend and tend to cut the discussions short.

*****

By the time Effie Tremayne got home, I was off the internet and excited to tell her what I learned. “Here’s my share of this month’s rent,” she said when she walked into the three bedroom condo I share with her.

“Never mind that. Let me tell you about the new job I’ll be getting.”

Effie did a quick change into her grubbies and went to work in the kitchen. She does some cooking and cleaning, and I give her a break on the rent. It’s not rent, it’s a mortgage. Jarvis the Rat let me have the condo in the divorce hoping I’d default and he could buy it on the cheap. That’s how lawyers think, I guess.

I launched into the story about my decision a few days ago. “I got flat tired of waiting for the alimony check to arrive, so I decided to get a permanent-temporary job. Today Rutledge landed me an interview with a smallish law firm that hires private investigators to dig up dirt.”

Effie stopped chopping the veggies and looked at me. “Don’t stop now.”

“Best of both worlds,” I said. “I can use the courses I took in criminal justice and learn more about how P.I.’s operate. After our caper last fall – the one you called The Case of the Falling Bodies – I’ve been thinking about getting a P.I. license.”

“Wow,” Effie said. “You going to let me work for you?”

“I think that’d be a long ways down the road. Oh, there’s another upside about the job. The office is close to Park Plaza Mall – and that… means lunch-hourshopping.”

“Let me know if they have jobs open I could do. I wouldn’t mind a change of scenery.”

We were finishing dinner when Aaron got home. Aaron Kincaid is our other roommate. He’s a flight attendant, he’s black and he’s gay. It took me a long while to get used to all that. In truth, it took me months to begin to overcome my prejudices.

“Aaron,” Effie said. “Do you want to work for Casey’s private investigator’s agency?”

That caught him off guard. He stood in the kitchen doorway, a quizzical look on his face and his mouth open. Effie launched into the details of my upcoming job and ideas about the future.

Later, in my room, I dialed Dennis Epstein’s number and got his voice mail. I met him last fall when I worked at the Midtown Atrium Towers Building and that body nearly landed on me. He’s a detective sergeant with the Little Rock Police Department and a hunk. Our relationship has blown hot and cold for the past several months. I left a message for him and hoped he would take it as encouraging.

*****

The next morning, Friday, I put on a business suit with a skirt that stopped well above the knees—that ought to hold his attention long enough to land the job. I was on my way to the law firm that was located near the intersection of University Avenue and West Markham Street.

I was right about Friday interviews. Mr. Thomasen, the senior partner in the law firm wanted to get away early, but he hired me on the spot. I was now an assistant paralegal at a more than decent salary.

Tracy Marston gave me a quick and dirty rundown on the company and handed me a tri-fold brochure about them. “This will answer most of your questions about the people here. And… ” She pulled a report-style folder from her desk, “…and this will explain what the bosses expect around here.” The cover page was titled: Thomasen, Sinclair & Westland–Employee Guidelines. I made the mistake of referring to the firm as T, S and W. Tracy corrected me saying, “The partners prefer that all of the names are always used.” I would have to remember that around here, but outside the office I was sure I would slip into the abbreviation.

I tucked both items into my purse, finished the employment paperwork and headed for Park Plaza Mall. I think a small celebration is in order Casey, my girl, I told myself. That thought must have been almost audible, because Tracy’s face bore a peculiar look as I left.


Chapter 3

Friday and Saturday went fast. I told my roommates everything I knew about the law firm where I’d be working. I read the employee guidelines and asked Effie and Aaron for their opinion of the document which contained only male references and pronouns. That coupled with the fact I assumed from my interview, all women want to be addressed by their first name pointed to an old boys network. We all agreed. The company seemed to lean toward the sexist side. “These folks need some educating,” I said.

Dennis and I managed to squeeze in a date early Saturday evening. We ate dinner at a small Italian restaurant. “Wish I had more time,” he said. “But I need to get back downtown. The homicides are piling up.”

I smiled and winked at him. “Anything my intrepid band of sleuths and I could help you with?”

“Don’t rub it in. You did a good job last fall, but I still wonder how much of it was luck.”

I put on a face I hoped would convey a hurt-to-the-quick persona, and fiddled with the parmesan shaker in the center of the table. None of this elicited a response so I resorted to words. “How many cases are you working?”

“Just stamped one ‘closed’ this morning. That leaves me with three open cases.”

I summoned up what was close to my total police vocabulary and said, “Run the open cases for me.”

“Casey, you know I can’t get into details with you.” He looked up at me and saw my fingers drumming on the table. It was too much for him, so he continued. “I’m looking at two females and one male victim. One of the females was a pros—a prostitute—on the near west side. Looks like she may have tried to rip off a John and he turned the tables on her. I guess the weirdest of these three is the guy. He was making a phone call at an outdoor kiosk. The killer double-tapped him in the head with a .22-caliber and the shooter was at least ten feet away—no stippling. Strange… for what looks like a contract job. The other female vic appears to be caught up in a domestic violence dispute.”

The look on Dennis’ face said: I talk too much. “Too bad you have to go back to work,” I said.

We finished our spumoni and left the restaurant. Dennis dropped me at the front door to my building. On the way through the lobby, I remembered no one checked the mail today. Twisting the key in the lock, I swung the small door open and scooped out the contents. Since I wasn’t expecting anything important, I tucked the mail under my arm and took the lobby elevator to the eighth floor. Inside my condo, I dropped the mail on the entryway table and joined Aaron and Effie in the living room where they were watching the evening news on a local channel.


Chapter 4


On Sunday morning, the aromas drifting from the kitchen woke me. Effie must be busy out there and knowing I might miss breakfast, I hurried through my a.m. rituals. Grubby sweat shorts and a tank top would have to do.

I hurried toward the kitchen and scooped up yesterday’s mail as I passed near the front door. Effie and Aaron were already seated at the table, which held a large platter stacked high with pecan pancakes. I slid into my chair and found orange juice and coffee already poured for me.

“I knew the smell of coffee would bring you out,” Effie said with a big smile on her face.

I grinned back and stabbed two pancakes from the platter. When they were slathered in butter and drowning in pure maple syrup, I sorted the mail into three piles. Pushing a stack toward Aaron, one to Effie and then I flipped through mine—a couple of bills, three that would go into the shredder and a postcard. The message side was plain except for an angel and hand-printed words—the message made no sense. I tossed it into the shred pile.

There was a single pancake left. “Anyone else want it?” Aaron said pointing to the lone occupant of the platter with his fork.

Effie and I shook our heads, so he speared the morsel and dropped it onto his plate in a single swift motion. He said, “All my mail’s junk. Either of you have any contributions for the shredder?”

Effie pushed all her envelopes, except one, toward him. I put my junk mail and the postcard onto his scrap heap. Aaron finished his last bite and reached for the shred pile. At the last minute, the postcard got a reprieve. “What do you make of this?” I said and handed it to Aaron. He read both sides, shook his head and passed it to Effie. Her head movement said no as well.

I re-consigned the card to the junk pile, poured another cup of coffee all around, and started on the Sunday morning paper. We adjourned to the living room, coffee and papers in hand. Aaron detoured through the den where the shredding machine resides.

A few minutes later, I looked at Aaron. “Did you run the mail through the shredder?”

“Nope. It’s in the reserved waste basket.”

I retrieved the postcard and returned to the living room where I sat staring at it—reading and rereading the words. It still made no sense to me, so I handed it to Effie, saying, “Describe what you see on both sides of the card—out loud.”

Effie turned the card over and started. “Well, it’s addressed to you.” She turned it over. “And—”

“No,” I said. “Describe everything. The writing, the printing—in detail.”

She continued, “Okay, on the address side is a pre-printed stamp, and in the lower left is a copyright notice from the post office and the word Recycled.”

I sat in my favorite chair, leaning back with my eyes closed. I was visualizing her words.

“Your address is printed on this side,” she said. “It’s all in lower case, like those letters I remember at the top of the blackboard when I was in grade school. It’s got your name and full address. That’s all for the front side. At the top of the back side, it says, ‘for me to know and you to find out’ followed by three periods.”

Aaron said, “That could be an ellipsis.”

She continued, “Below that there’s an angel with a bow and arrow. It’s an all black silhouette. And under that, in lower case printing again—oh, the ‘for me to know’ part was lower case as well. This part says, ‘you need to go a long, long way to find the arrow’ and there’s two dashes.”

“Describe the angel again,” Aaron said.

She did and we guessed at the meaning.

“Besides being an angel,” Aaron said, “the figure could be Cupid. Aren’t there other names for that character?”

Effie took the lead. “Eros from the Greek and Amor is one from the Romans.” She must have seen perplexed looks on our faces and added, “I was just reading a book on mythology. By the way, Cupid is also from the Romans.”

“Okay, so what does that figure mean, what does it stand for?” Aaron said. “I’ll check the internet for definitions.” He returned a few minutes later. “Eros is listed as the God of Desire and Sexual Passion. Amor and Cupid are the Roman counterparts and represent the God of Love.”

“They all seem to stand for the same thing,” Effie said, looking a bit embarrassed. “Love, sex and desire.”

I was still shaking my head. “But what does the figure mean in this context?”

Again, none of us had a clue, so we shifted the discussion to the printed words. We decided that the first line, ‘for me to know and you to find out… ’ was a challenge of some sort. The other line made no sense at all. “Read that last line again, Effie,” I said.

“Okay. ‘you need to go a long, long way to find the arrow.’ …And I can’t make anything of it. Is Cupid, or whatever we call him—or her—going to shoot the arrow? There’s a nursery rhyme where somebody shoots an arrow in the air and doesn’t know where it’s going to land. Anyone remember who that was?”

Aaron rose and headed for the den again. He was back in a couple of minutes with details on the rhyme. “It was a poem by Wordsworth and doesn’t identify the archer, except it’s in first person ‘I’… and the arrow landed in a tree and he didn’t find it for a long time.”

It was Effie’s turn again. “Could that last line be a riddle?”

“What could it mean?” I said.

We muddled over what a “long, long way” could be—how far? Feet, yards, miles or farther? Were we after a person, a place or a thing? When we solved the clue, what would we find?

Effie named our newest pursuit. “We can call it The Case of the Mysterious Postcard.”

That’s as far as we got. I tucked the card into a slot in the roll top desk and we all went back to the Sunday newspaper.

This book features a thrilling cover and logo design by Jeffrey Hayes and print formatting by Forrest Bryant, the latest Casey Fremont thriller is available now at Amazon at http://goo.gl/faFZLH and Pro Se’s own store at www.prose-press.com for 15.00. 


Three, Four-Kill Some More is also available as an Ebook, designed and formatted by Bryant and available for only $2.99 for the Kindle at http://goo.gl/sh4HZ0 and for most digital formats via Smashwords at http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/566404.

For more information on this title, contact Hancock at editorinchief@prose-press.com.

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