Forgive Us Our Trespasses
by Tom Avitabile
February 21 - March 4, 2022 Virtual Book Tour
Synopsis:
The bruise on the young goalie’s cheek got girls high school soccer coach Brooke Burrell’s attention. Brooke tries to keep her advantage as the most decorated woman agent ever in government service at bay while dealing with the suspected abusive father – although she’d love to punch his lights out. Her digging reveals the reason for his abusiveness and it connects to a massive international terrorist attack.
When the father is found dead, Brooke is accused of the murder. Suddenly, she is forced to defend herself in court, and in the court of public opinion – while trying to stop the insidious plot to kill hundreds of thousands of innocent people across the globe in one terrifying instant and bring the western world to its knees.
Filled with the nonstop thrills, all-too-real scenarios, and remarkable attention to detail that has made Tom Avitabile a consistent #1 bestseller, Forgive Us Our Trespasses is edge-of-your-seat storytelling of the first order.
Book Details:
Genre: Thriller
Published by: The Story Plant
Publication Date: February 22, 2022
Number of Pages: 320
ISBN: 9781611883220
Series: A Brooke Burrell Thriller || Each is a Stand Alone Novel
Purchase Links: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Read an excerpt:
Brooke was escorted to the lobby of a government building where a tall man, wearing a sharp-cut suit and perfect tan, extended his hand as he introduced himself. “Mrs. Morton? Kyle Simms, head of 5-0.”
“Pleasure, Simms. Let’s get to it,” Brooke said as if she had been the one to call this meeting. It made him raise an eyebrow.
He extended his arm in the direction of the elevator. “Please.” The well-mannered Simms let her enter first. He pressed the button for the top floor. She noticed the manicured hand.Buffed, not polished. She detected the faint smell of cigars. Must have caught him coming back from a smoke break, she imagined.
“To the right,” he said as the elevator door opened. He pointed to the glass doors of a sunlit corner office. When they entered, he gestured to a small conference table opposite his very impressive desk. She noticed his “Love Me Wall.” It was de rigueur for military officers. His was filled with photos and newspaper headlines in wood frames. There was a plaque on the wall: Operation Desert Storm. A framed picture showed a platoon of Rangers. From across the room, she couldn’t make out which one of the younger men was Simms. A Ranger beret with a silver bar pinned to it was resting on the credenza. It told Brooke he had been a first lieutenant. Brooke took a seat.
“Coffee?” Simms said. Brooke considered it, then her overactive bladder of late. “No thanks. Is Jenny Kupalli alright?”
“The daughter? Yes, she’s with child services right now.”
“Thank God. I was so worried when she didn’t show for the game this morning.”
“Mrs. Morton, you are here as a courtesy. I have an inkling of your former service to our country. So I wanted to give you every chance to tell me your side of the story.”
“Courtesy? You send a unit, a cage unit? To my school! You could have just called me. I would have driven right over.”
“I’m sorry, you know how this goes. I ask them to drive you over as a courtesy, and somehow they assign an RMP, not a detective’s car. Sorry. Wasn’t intentional.” Brooke wasn’t buying it. She had used this technique to soften persons of interest the
same way by putting a little police procedural fear into them before their conversation. “Are you considering me as a suspect?"
“Again, right now you are a POI. Nothing more.”
“Let me ask you, are you recording, transcribing or in any way preserving our conversation today, Saturday at 2:03 p.m. at 5-0 headquarters?” Simms smiled. If they were, and they weren’t, she just made the whole practice inadmissible in court. “No. Kyle Simms, Deputy Director of Law Enforcement, HPD state police department,” he said, clarifying his rank just to match her pseudo-official disclaimer.
His official response told Brooke that she didn’t need a lawyer. Over the next ten minutes she read him in on her total encounter with Mr. Kupalli and her suspicions about Jenny’s abuse.
He listened intently, scratching notes. When she paused, he waited. But she was not falling for the “fill-the-silence” ploy. So, he sat back, looked at her for a few seconds. She just looked back. It was a standoff.
He broke the stalemate. “And you had never met him before?”
“I don’t believe he ever came to a game. Seems like the kind of guy who wouldn’t cheer on an equipment manager.”
Simms nodded. Then, as if he made a hard left turn, said, “Do you own a 9-mm handgun?”
Brooke sighed. Simms was going to go strictly by the book. “Yes. Glock 26.”
“Do you know where it is now?”
“In the fingerprint safe by my bed.”
“Would you be willing to voluntarily surrender the weapon for ballistic elimination?”
“For my protection, and yours, you’ll need a warrant, hopefully limited in scope, Deputy Director. As I’m sure you’re aware, my husband is a high-ranking naval officer. Poking around our home might violate his Fourth Amendment rights and no less than three national security protocols.”
“Fair enough. Off record?”
Brooke shot him a look. Her defenses reared up. “Wasn’t this all off record?”
“True, but this is more personal than professional.”
“Okay. Shoot.”
“That’s what I’m asking you. Did you shoot this model citizen?”
That was an odd question to ask off the record, Brooke thought. “Nope. In fact, just the opposite. I had hoped that I put the fear of God into him. I believed he’d have second thoughts about smacking around his daughter now that he knew I had eyes on him. But a Skel like him, he must’ve pissed in someone’s Cheerios somewhere along the way, and that’s what probably contributed to him achieving room temperature last night.”
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Excerpt from Forgive Us Our Trespasses by Tom Avitabile. Copyright 2022 by Tom Avitabile. Reproduced with permission from The Story Plant. All rights reserved.
My Thoughts
| Forgive Us Our Trespasses by Tom Avitable is the next book featuring Brooke Burrell. Brooke has retired from the FBI so she can return to Hawaii, be a wife, mother and high school soccer coach. Life is good, until she spots a bruise on one of the girls she coaches. She confronts the father, who does not take her involvement kindly. Even though she is one of the most decorated women ever in the government, she just wants to do what she feels is right and protect the girls she works with. So, the father is found dead, she is suspected of the murder because of the altercation they had with each other. So not only does she have to defend herself, in her investigation into the father, she finds that there is a plot to blow up 100 planes at the same time ultimately killing all on board plus whatever collateral damage there may be. The press and the DA don't care, they just want a conviction, and she is the one they want. Along with her husband and close friends from her unit, they must do what they can to stop the killer. Did I mention that Brooke is pregnant? This story is an intense thriller, one of which I have not read in a long time. Almost real scenarios that could actually happen in this age of the internet. Filled with fun characters, attention to detail, intense plot makes this book a real page turner. This book had me wanting more but I loved the ending, keeping the plot open for more to come. I am going to go and read the first book Give Us This Day. As a matter of fact, I just purchased it! I give this book 5 stars, perfection! |
Author Bio:
Tom Avitabile is a writer, director, and producer with numerous film and television credits, a professional musician, and an amateur woodworker. He has an extensive background in engineering and computers, including work on projects for the House Committee on Science and Technology. His novel The Devil's Quota became a Barnes and Noble #1 bestseller, as did The Eighth Day, the first installment of his Bill Hiccock “thrillogy” that includes the novels The Hammer of God and The God Particle, and the first Brooke Burrell novel, Give Us This Day.
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YAAAAAY!!!!! So glad to hear you loved it! I will be reading this one myself and yours is the first review I have read. Now I am really looking forward to it! :-D
ReplyDeleteYou will not be disappointed! A great book!
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